Issue 21: | 1 Jan. 2024 |
Tanka Tale, | responsive |
289 words |
Bad Jack lays his weather-beaten poncho on the ground, smooths it out with his rough, sun-browned desperado hands, and sits cross-legged on one corner, depositing rocks on the other three to keep the poncho in place, in case one of the occasional gusty winds comes down from the pine-encrusted slopes of the Sierra de Guadalupe. He glances up at El Capitan through squinty eyes, one hand pressed against his brow to shield them from the brilliant red-orange glow of the setting sun, the other reaching into his pocket for a box of matches. He finds a stogey in his satchel, strikes a match, and lights up.
that scratching itch again he laments now to find himself a waterhole for a hated bath a waste of easy time, he says
After a few leisurely and deep drags, which Bad Jack exhales through his nostrils, he snips off the hot ashes with his calloused brown fingers and puts the two-inch stub back into his satchel, removing at the same time a ratty old deck of playing cards—a trusted companion, along with his stolen horse, Eduardo, for a solitary bandito always on the run, such as Bad Jack Muldoon.
coffee brews in a banged-up tin can over the campfire— you can’t win at solitaire with a 51-card deck in an instant his keen hand detected one missing card in his first spread he saw it was the Queen of Spades it stood for strength and clever dealing to keep him sharp, he was told to remember the map and where he hid the stolen gold the scent of pine and freshly laid manure wafts gently past Bad Jack’s aquiline beak Eduardo snorts and flicks his tail
—From Shadows of the Saguaro: The Wiles of Cactus Annie May and Bad Jack Muldoon, a series of responsive tanka tales by Lester and Miko. For three additional tales from the series, see Tanka Forms in Issue 20 of MacQ.
is a CPA, attorney, and poet who lives in Los Angeles, California. His writing has been widely published in prestigious poetry journals, has been translated into several languages, and has won numerous awards worldwide. Michael’s recent publications include two illustrated children’s books, Cassandra and the Strange Tale of the Blue-Footed Boobies and Johnny and Frankie’s Summer Sleepover, as well as a book of poetry, Notes from a Commode: Volume I. A fourth book, The Squeeping Catterwhip, is now available on Amazon.
is a retired television producer. She is a widely published poet in the haiku and tanka communities. Her illustrations have been featured in Billboard Magazine and displayed on Nagle Outdoor billboards. She was nominated for the McKnight Foundation Art Award for creating gardening workbooks for the JD Rivers’ Children’s Garden in Minneapolis. She lives in Southern California with her humoring husband.
Author’s website: http://www.vickimiko.com/
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